Rather good. The characters' voices were 95% convincing. I'm impressed.
david | 11.26.03 - 1:01 am | #

Can I just add to the praise
Gert | Homepage | 11.25.03 - 12:00 pm | #

I really enjoyed that, thanks!
Clair | Homepage | 11.24.03 - 11:02 pm | #

Beautiful.
Get an agent, if you haven't one already.
asta | 11.21.03 - 4:03 pm | #

Love it! Beautifully flowing, connections not forced, nicely done.
Selvy | 11.21.03 - 2:06 pm | #

excellent!
dave | Homepage | 11.21.03 - 1:34 pm | #

Lovely stuff. Enjoyed that a lot - thanks.
mike | Homepage | 11.21.03 - 12:03 pm | #

nicely crafted. very well done. happy almost-birthday.
kate | Homepage | 11.21.03 - 11:03 am | #