Josh was right, Mr. Cella. A solid piece and well-written. It's goood to see someone take pride in sentence construction and felicity of phrasing. And who actually proofreads before he publishes. I particularly like your inversion of the "living document" cant. You might look this over to see if there's anything that needs polishing, and then send it off to an online conservative publication.
No harm in trying.
William Luse | Homepage | 12.27.02 - 3:52 am | #

Very good.

To bring it full circle, at the end there you might make it concentration of power, rather than "abuse". the eventual abuse being understood.


oj | Homepage | 12.27.02 - 10:47 am | #