Ouch.
I hope she went home and ate the pizza with one hand while tossing his things out the window with her other.
Great piece of untitled, Anne!
terri | Homepage | 28.02.07 - 4:04 am | #

This is great, Anne. But I have to say: Any writer worth her salt would have told WHAT KIND OF PIZZA WAS IT?

Gack, amateurs....
Old Horsetail Snake | Homepage | 27.02.07 - 5:12 pm | #

Funny you should mention, FM, I didn't know what the ending would be. :)
Well, she did get a free pizza, Fence.
No worries, it is fiction, Jason - 2007 being my year and all... ;)
anne | Homepage | 27.02.07 - 10:33 am | #

I hope that's fiction.

If so, well done.

If not, Jesus....
jason evans | Homepage | 27.02.07 - 9:32 am | #

Poor Natalie.
Fence | Homepage | 27.02.07 - 6:21 am | #

Oh my. We seem to have mastered the art of the ending since last we wrote something like this.
forgottenmachine | Homepage | 27.02.07 - 4:23 am | #