I am REALLY going to enjoy this!! Any critique I may have I'm lucky enough to share in person.
I felt like i was back at your apartment. Except you didn't describe the temperature and why you can hear the dogs.
good stuff.
your first person accounts are interesting; i can tell it's you who is writing.
and that chick sounds like a damn buzzkill. confront her about it and tell her to stop being a twat (and nobody thinks her contributions are funny).
Commenting by HaloScan
