Hey! Great effort. Love it, just my style! All poems should give advice, that's what they're for.
R.H. | 06.21.09 - 5:10 pm | #

Thanks RH had a feeling you might have dropp-ed by. (Had to re-read it for the advice part.) 'Tis experience that's the greatest teacher, but good to 'learn' from others. Horse got almost as much of a fright as I did.
Caroline | 06.21.09 - 8:48 pm | #

Of course I dropp-ed by, I'm on a blog comment marathon!
All my poems give advice, or why bother? I can't stand that flowery stuff, it makes me sick! Browning, there's a Man for you!- Childe Roland, oh my goodness, the advice in that. But Coleridge, what a pansy, drag queen in tights, about as interesting as a speech in parliament.
R.H. | 06.22.09 - 1:02 am | #

And I'm right onto you playing Doris Day on the shortest Day, not everyone would pick it up but it couldn't get past me!

-Robert!
R.H. | 06.22.09 - 1:19 am | #

Moonclouds drift
across darkened sky,
sunrise melds
into orange
and pinks
or grey drifts
of feather cloud;
or whether thoughts
are proud.
Davo | Homepage | 06.22.09 - 9:35 pm | #

um, spur of the moment ..can I delete and rewrite that shit?
Davo | Homepage | 06.22.09 - 9:37 pm | #