Well done. It's scary to imagine a future like the one the scientist describes - but I'm able to see it all so clearly and believe it could all happen with the background information and "facts" you give. Again, I got lost in this alternate world.
Sunshine(kvb-e) | Homepage | 07.04.05 - 10:24 pm | #

That was great. I could picture the whole thing so clearly.
Kat | Homepage | 07.04.05 - 11:11 pm | #

"Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it."

Nicely done D. So much reality to the story that it's very plausible. How hard was it to avoid using "flux capacitor"? (:
m... | Homepage | 07.06.05 - 1:51 am | #

excellent. i like the narrative flow. time paradox was well done. it's a great short story.
sadielynn | 07.12.05 - 9:21 pm | #

Great story! I love how you incorporated the very plausible future you are describing as a direction our country could be headed into a little bit of time travel sci-fi. Well written man.
I still think your stuff is top notch. I've read a few published books this summer that, while they were ok for killing time and relaxing, made me wish they were written by someone with your talent. Keep it up!
jeremy | Homepage | 08.30.05 - 12:39 pm | #