Excellent! It was worth the wait. Looking forward to more.
Kat | Homepage | 07.23.05 - 8:18 pm | #

The story was a great read nearly 2 years ago when you first wrote it. I'm glad you've revisited it and made some interesting changed that have shed some new light on Charles and Philip and this thought provoking story. Your faithful readers (your wife included) are in for a treat.

I'm excited for you to go back and look at other short stories you have written - possibly expand on some ideas you have touched on and build these stories into the great novels I know they can be. You're a wonderful writer.
KVB-E (Sunshine) | Homepage | 07.23.05 - 9:50 pm | #

I too, am looking forward to more.
m... | Homepage | 08.03.05 - 1:30 am | #

Again, keep it up!
jeremy | Homepage | 08.30.05 - 2:39 pm | #