Love it!

Impatiently waiting for more!
Kat | Homepage | 10.10.05 - 10:20 am | #

I like the changes you made before posting it - makes a big difference. Particularly enjoy how this one is unfolding - especially the characterization and the humor...and you know I enjoy a story with a vampire in it.
KVB-E (Sunshine) | Homepage | 10.10.05 - 4:47 pm | #

i like how you are very specific about the beverages. Looking forward to seeing how this one ends.
m... | Homepage | 10.20.05 - 12:37 am | #

Man, I'm really enjoying this. Now I'm hooked and awaiting the next part. Good job!
jeremy | Homepage | 10.25.05 - 12:42 pm | #