You should be proud. Glad you had a good experience with Lulu. I look forward to what you publish next.
I've been reading your offerings here, Justin, much of the month. I was doing NaPo over at the Gazebo, and with the daily writing, I wasn't able to do much in the way of commenting. I am glad it was so fruitful for you. I loved it. If I never write another poem all year, I've got 30 to revise and polish.
Congratulations! You made it through the month and by the sound and look of it, you got a lot of "real," meaty work written. It wasn't just filler haikus. = )
I think your combination of givnig yourself closure by gathering the chapbook poems together via LULU--while also committing to a fresh, full-length MS--sounds promising. Good luck and keep us posted.
You're an inspiration--continually writing, doing what you love in your way.
I really like this poem a lot. "Fracture me from myself" is a strong line. I kind of think the line "flooding my entire body" isn't necessary because the poem already suggests that.
I like the use of line breaks and short lines--works very well here.
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