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Excellent paper. I can find a few things needing revising, such as spelling and maybe phrasing something differently. Those are minor (which is why they invented spell checking software) and not worth mentioning in detail. Only thing I will correct is JFK did NOT send the special forces to Vietnam in 1957 since he didn't take office until Jan 1961. If the source (#5 Vietnam Studies US Army Special Forces 1961-1971) used the incorrect date, then you should note the error in the date in your paper since its an obvious date error.
Sorry to pick on something so small but that is all I can really find. A great paper and yes it got the grade it deserved, 98 / 100, aka an A.
Great paper JA, and it did deserve an A. I did see the things Andrew mentioned but know that you too will also learn from this. By the way this paper flows together I still think there is a budding writer in you somewhere. Keep on writing!
Agree with Andrew; one item right off the top you might want to remember for future reference: it's "reins of power", not "reigns". Think horses, not kings. Oh, and another pet peeve: "loosing" rhymes with "goosing", and means untying or untightening. "Losing" rhymes with "using", and means not winning, or misplacing.
In a way, what Petraeus is doing is: more of what works, less of what doesn't. Funny how hard that is for some people to learn.
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Pretty good paper.
This is how the gods do business:::::They use temptation and deception to compel people to chase something that has already been decided. It's children who go to "beaven". OLd people have to come back. The gods will use their power to contradict this, corrupting people and compelling them to incurr evil::::They used the Italians to ruin life in the 20th century, cost you the Final Prophet and the result will be death as you wait for the Italian Second Coming of Christ to save you.
This is the god's positioning and it IS going to be enforced. Never forget::::The gods have always offered "protection" to those genuinely religious. It is something that was always respected, even in the wicked 20th century.
As people begin to age the gods employ corrupting tactics. They ultimately begin to look down on the children and the wisdom they recently understood:::
They voluntarily turn their back on their opportunity to ascend and instead embrace evil.
It's not old people who go to heaven. Old people must come back because of the mistakes they've made throughout their lives. Children are the ones who have the opportunity to ascend.
Children are discounted by adults in society. The gods corrupt people as they age, use trust-building tactics and soon adults view the children as ignorant, yet to understand the god's system, and subsequently look down on the children. This is one of the most bitter, painful ironies the gods employ, for people consciously turn their back on and lose their opportunity to ascend::::
Religions teach that old people to go to heaven when they die. They don't. Old people are reincarnated. It's the children who go to heaven, those who have a chance at immortality.
The wisdom the gods impart to children, either through their innocence/purity or religious-based educational pursuits are the gods sharing the truth with their most favored people::::It's the children whom the gods teach the right way for it is the children who have a chance. For example, they teach children to have faith, for understanding the god's geographical clues hurts people by illustrating negative things, opening the door for the god's to employ deceptive tactics.
Old people don't go to heaven. Old people must come back because of the mistakes they've made throughout their lives. It's the children who have the opportunity to go to "heaven". They must behave apprioriately, think correctly and be genuinely god-fearing. Their innocence and lack of desensitization ensures they have a real opportunity to achieve this goal.
This is charecteristic of the gods methodology::::The big prize gone early, deception compels people to chase something that has already been decided. They sent this clue with boss as well. It is also a clue supporting my claim RW&B's german is in fact Christianity's Anti-Christ. Logic also dictates, considering the definition.
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