Lord, how do you stand it? I have never read anything that bad before.
kenju | Homepage | 02.25.06 - 10:51 pm | #

This from a college student? I wouldn't accept it from one of my high school freshmen!
graycie | Homepage | 02.25.06 - 11:38 pm | #

And curiously, it's not inspiring me to a viewing of the film.
Uisce | Homepage | 02.26.06 - 4:17 am | #

Just how old is this student???
That is truly beyond-belief-bad, isn't it? How did someone get out of grade school?? OY!
OldOldLady Of The Hills | Homepage | 02.26.06 - 6:12 am | #

I know dogs who write better than that. So do you.
Amerloc | Homepage | 02.26.06 - 9:51 am | #

Yikes! This is some pretty bad writing--scheisse indeed.
Margaret | Homepage | 02.26.06 - 4:03 pm | #

Yeah, that's about right. I see that all the time. Your students should meet my students. They would have scintillating intellectual conversations over Mt. Dew and and beef jerky.
MJ | 02.27.06 - 11:14 am | #

Finally, an essay worse than the ones my 13yo writes. Is the movie really that bad?
Goldie | Homepage | 02.27.06 - 11:32 am | #

sings..."....GOING DOWN IN A BLAZE OF GLORY..." This kid just doesn't get it does he?
Hula Doula | Homepage | 03.01.06 - 1:57 pm | #