Great tip.
Sheena | 11.15.05 - 12:52 pm | #

You are SO right. Description embedded in action--and from a character's pov--does extra duty by advancing the story and/or characterizing.

For another discussion on overwriting, check out my post on Flogging the Quill, "Kudzu writing--attack of the killer verbiage." The URL is http://www.floggingthequill.com/ ..._writingat.html

Best,

Ray Rhamey
Ray Rhamey | Homepage | 11.15.05 - 3:45 pm | #