Wow... nice twist. I'd say more but I'm stuck on the ending. Yeah, wow...
rachel | Homepage | 08.30.06 - 11:03 pm | #

Thanks, Rachel.
John D | Homepage | 08.30.06 - 11:22 pm | #

Awesome! I really like the ending. I had the little movie running in my head and everything.

I've always wanted to try writing fiction. I took a short-story writing class in college and they liked my stories during our critiques. However, I analyze while I write and that hurts the process.
rt | Homepage | 08.31.06 - 12:24 am | #

Thanks, rt. I tend to do the same thing when I write. Consequently, it takes me just this side of forever to finish a story. What I'm trying to do is to force myself to get through the story without editing too much as I go. Then I go back and edit later. So far, I'm not having much luck at that. Maybe I'm too obsessive-compulsive.
John D | Homepage | 08.31.06 - 7:56 am | #