i have no idea why u have put this story!!!!
have seen the story in darna mana hai.....did they steal from u?
kestrel | 06.04.05 - 7:31 am | #

Nice set up and good writing. I couldn't read it all...maybe need to be done in installments for some readers. Michele sent me today.
colleen | Homepage | 06.04.05 - 10:15 am | #

I am going to look around...

Michelle sent me......
the torch singer | Homepage | 06.04.05 - 10:58 am | #

Hi Rohit...thanks for the visit..seems like you got me on a rant day ;0) I appreciate the kind words! Your story is very descriptive..nice writing..the story is a bit gut wrenching for me, but well written! I'm going to poke around some more ;0)
J&J's Mom | Homepage | 06.04.05 - 11:07 am | #

I thought I was reading Stephen King or Dean Koontz for a minute there! I think you are very talented, but kinda scary too!
I'll be back!
~MARCI ~
Marci | Homepage | 06.04.05 - 2:08 pm | #

Your story was ominously pointing towards the end right from the start. The old man's character is drawn well. Did you know that blood was one of human's first pigments to paint cave walls with...?
Christine | Homepage | 06.04.05 - 8:08 pm | #

Bloody morbid!
pardon the pun.
curses | Homepage | 06.05.05 - 10:18 am | #

chilling.
but taut enough to keep anyone gripped. rocking dude.. very much so.
SEV | Homepage | 06.05.05 - 10:48 am | #

hey i remebr seeing a hindi movie...something like this...

well written...sounds more english...me with curses...yeah bloody morbid...
sophia | Homepage | 06.06.05 - 2:04 am | #