beautiful.
you have a real talent for making those ideas flesh out well. and short and sweet only adds to the coolness for me.
basically, i loved it at any rate.
SEV | Homepage | 07.14.05 - 5:20 pm | #

I really enjoyed reading this.
And, re: your comment - I'm fine, I'm well, I've been mostly posting to my regular blog (www.missmeliss.com) and not to moonchilde.com, because the stuff I've written lately has all been submitted to webzines, and therefore not web-postable.

But thanks for checking in.
Belle Nuit | Homepage | 07.15.05 - 1:48 pm | #

"The clouds spat back" - I really love that line. Good imagery!
Ecks Ridgehead | Homepage | 07.19.05 - 6:12 am | #

LOL. thanks for writing that. Love the ending.
Pearl | Homepage | 07.21.05 - 10:10 am | #