Rick, A critique via my private e-mail at your convenience would be appreciated.
And then you would have an excerpt which has a grammatical error (build instead of built, which has been corrected in the original).
Ron,
It's not a biggy in my book. I know my fingers never work as fast as my brain. Not that my brain works that fast, but my three typing fingers don't always do what I tell them to do. 
Good job; I liked it.
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