i hate that i had to read this. thanks.
jenB | Homepage | 02.04.07 - 12:40 am | #

oh my god, best story ever.

but the moral is a little ambiguous.
the Admiral | Homepage | 02.04.07 - 1:43 am | #

See, you're proving my point RIGHT THERE. With your happy-go-lucky story of deceit and violence and credit consolidation.
Scott-san | Homepage | 02.04.07 - 8:15 am | #

Whatever. See what happens when I try to be nice?

I hated writing this, by the way. Stupid rats with their stupid watches.
Erin | Homepage | 02.04.07 - 9:33 am | #

Oh My God. This was really good but I wish I'd never read it. Can we have the test-audience-wants-a-happy-ending rewrite?
Trish | 02.04.07 - 10:14 am | #

No.

Take it up with Scott. Captain of the Happy Banners.
Erin | Homepage | 02.04.07 - 10:22 am | #

Thanks Scott for ruining it for everyone...
mia | Homepage | 02.05.07 - 10:16 am | #

You're welcome. I do what I can. With MS Paint.
Scott-san | Homepage | 02.05.07 - 10:30 am | #

I wouldn't have believed the rabbit either. Who ever heard of a rabbit only having one baby. Pretty shady if you ask me.
Tom | 02.05.07 - 3:01 pm | #

Maybe it was the only baby that LIVED.

TOM.

You ever think of that?
Erin | Homepage | 02.05.07 - 3:14 pm | #

I suppose it's possible, but everyone knows that rabbits are horrible liars. Especially the brown, whisker chewing ones. I still would've punted him.
Tom | 02.05.07 - 5:32 pm | #

Wait, how does that old saying go?

"Rats before rabbits, lying's a bad habit... rabbits before rats, kick a rabbit in the stomach."
Erin | Homepage | 02.05.07 - 9:28 pm | #

Ha ha this was like a depressing bedtime story. That I read at work.
styro | Homepage | 02.07.07 - 7:14 am | #