Excellent.

I particularly like the bell repetition and the leaf play on words (I don't know the proper literary terms for it, but you know what I mean).
Dan | Homepage | 09.11.07 - 5:19 am | #

nice change of pace. i like this!
sizzle | Homepage | 09.11.07 - 10:04 am | #

I like it too. Not much more to say about it.
Darren | Homepage | 09.11.07 - 11:55 am | #

Your poem is so beautiful and heartfelt. Nothing else to add.
princesnana | 09.11.07 - 12:19 pm | #

Thank you for this, Whit.
fluttercrafts | Homepage | 09.11.07 - 12:56 pm | #

***big, big sigh***

thank you...
Kevin Charnas | Homepage | 09.11.07 - 2:34 pm | #

Nice.
Jeff | Homepage | 09.11.07 - 4:13 pm | #

Beautiful.
Absolutely beautiful.
And so horribly sad.

thank you.
xox
the domestic minx | Homepage | 09.11.07 - 7:32 pm | #

DAMN!!
Well done...AGAIN!

Jeff's Place | Homepage | 09.11.07 - 11:52 pm | #

Truer words were never spoken. Lovely.
sue | Homepage | 09.12.07 - 10:21 am | #